Chill Out!

LI:To plan where my similies and adjectives and metaphors will go in my writing.

LI:To get in the habbit of using the reverse strategy.

LI:To explain details of what I saw heard and what I am doing!

Chill Out

I’m in my bunk bed… I’m faintly twisting, huffing nervously. I see the ragged crackly wooden bunk beds. The scratchy itchy matress. The chirping owls annoying me. I am cracking up, trying to keep it a very still noise, Tyrells making the most quiet silly funny jokes.

Mr Momo, furious Mr Momo, lumbers in my cabin like a angry annoyed giant. I peek away in a dart. Close my eyes and waves of dark black nothing appears in front of me. I’m trying to pretend I’m asleep. Mr Momo roars as load as a husky… “BOYS OUT, CHILL OUT!!!” “Arrgh” I moaned, I thought I made the trick. I stroll nervously to Chill out wondering what this can be…

Mrs Milne stands there and looks very very sulky. “Boys bla bla bla bla bla!!!!” She sounded like a eagle munching on it’s food. At this moment I wasn’t even listening I was so frightened!!!

Mr Momo had a growl louder than a bear! I was going to clapse. At the moment I am more nervous than I am on cross country day!!

Mr Momo shouted loudly, “Get back inside nowwwwwww!!!”

I scampered inside feeling extremely ashamed. I deserve now to be walking on the hard crumply stone floor and to be back at my cabin from my big adventure on a mushy delicate pillow!!

I am very ashamed!

The End.

I Had The Feeling!!

I Had The Feeling!!

It was free time. I was hyped up, I’d been planning to play at free time for the whole day… MARKO POLO!!! I welcomed a group of a few of my mates. We played down on the plain bumpy grass down where the burma trail was held. Where proudly stood the majestic bush! The crumply oak tree stood like a wonky twig. My mates and I could hear the furios noise of wolves which where actually brain killing crickets!!! The scruffy grass made me itch my delicate toes. The moist dirt squeezed soggy wet jew through my toes and cleared out my  stinky and atrotiuos TOE JAM!! The time that made this memorable was when was making all of my friends shriek so hard! What made my mates laugh was when I was on the bumpy uneven mushy dirt that made my feet get soaked and all that did was make me go tumbling and twisting along the grass! But the funny part is all this time I was blindfolded! At one point when Tai tagged me I tripped… SMODGED MYSLEF IN THE DIRT!!! And managed to capture a tangy and gross… a piece of soggy warm… GRASS!! At this moment in time I just had the feeling that I was the greatest of all time…

COMEDIAN!!